The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

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The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

The bar graph represents the proportion of female unemployment in the countries that make up the United Kingdom from 2013 to 2014. There has been a small decrease in female unemployment rates from 2013 to 2014, except Scotland.
England had the highest female unemployment rates, with 6.8% in 2013, but which decreased by 0.3% by 2014. In comparison, Scotland was the only country which had an increasing percentage of unemployed women. In 2013, it had 6.3% of women out of work and this figure rose to 6.7% by 2014, making it the country with the highest female unemployment rate of the four countries.
In 2013, Northern Ireland had 5.6% of women were unemployed, whereas Wales had the lowest female unemployment rate of 5.4%. The female unemployment rates for Wales and Scotland experienced the equivalent figure of decline of 0.4% each for two consecutive years, from 2013 to 2014.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'so', 'whereas']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269005847953 0.268076937826 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.093567251462 0.116061578633 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.093567251462 0.0759168565197 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0 0.0366838410393 0% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0116959064327 0.0131127313244 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.157894736842 0.155750635184 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0233918128655 0.0379272487307 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76548697131 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0233918128655 0.0210936926555 111% => OK
Particles: 0.00584795321637 0.00175180941692 334% => OK
Determiners: 0.093567251462 0.0948980150116 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0175438596491 0.00967000014798 181% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 885.0 1161.00487805 76% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.9 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97972972973 5.90752243213 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73763899035 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.324324324324 0.337110787985 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222972972973 0.247514529752 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162162162162 0.171178102325 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135135135135 0.112407865282 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76548697131 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.546246751206 103% => OK
Word variations: 45.6296232613 49.3433353143 92% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1428571429 23.0094962315 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3473824274 42.9750493124 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.428571429 135.714022679 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 23.0094962315 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.689975730869 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 43.4401544402 47.7609492067 91% => OK
Elegance: 4.27777777778 2.94281807926 145% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.60110111005 0.418131533498 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.209736224388 0.181151798455 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0581565361396 0.0850326197045 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.708742941542 0.706616315825 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.108307624638 0.157042692854 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.326944383274 0.228904883108 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09954671039 0.108899403657 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.452299179022 0.367819155151 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0430706778522 0.0812612215331 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.460191804184 0.316326947829 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046977069668 0.0921553760075 51% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70731707317 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.14146341463 526% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 3.16585365854 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 6.0 0.956097560976 628% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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