The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart show data on the number of the UK citizens visits other countries and people travelled visits the UK during two decades in 1979-1999. According to the first chart. People can see, the UK residents visits abroad is much higher than overseas came to the UK.
Looking at the detail, people who was travelled to the UK around 10 million and the UK citizens visit outside countries was almost 20 million in 1979. Both of the numbers control on increasing continuously till 1985 ,and after that both of those group are increasing strongly although the numbers of UK residents had more speedy than travellers visits the UK. The UK counted almost 55 million in 1999 while over 20 million travellers came to the UK. It shown the UK travellers is more double higher than people visits the UK.
Thr second bar graph show the number of countries visited by the UK citizens in 1999. France was the first dominated the UK travellers as favorite country destination. It calculated over 10 million people in this year. The second country was spain where about 8 million the UK travellers. The last three countries visited by the UK citizens were the USA, greece and turkey. They were counted fewer than 5 million the UK visitors in 1999.
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Essay evaluation report
The chart show data on the number of the UK citizens visits other countries
The charts show the data on the number of the UK citizens who visit other countries
People can see, the UK residents visits abroad is much higher than overseas came to the UK.
People can see that the number of UK residents who go abroad is much higher than that of overseas who came to the UK.
people who was travelled to the UK
people who travelled to the UK
and the UK citizens visit outside countries was almost 20 million in 1979
and the UK citizens who visit outside countries were almost 20 millions in 1979
than travellers visits the UK.
than travellers who visit the UK.
UK travellers is more
UK travellers are more
Thr second bar graph show the number of countries
The second bar graph shows the number of countries
was spain where about 8 million the UK travellers
was spain where there are about 8 million the UK travellers
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
Some grammar issues. Read a good grammar book. You may read this one: http://testbig.com/question/grammar
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 215 200
No. of Characters: 998 1000
No. of Different Words: 104 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.829 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.642 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.438 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.538 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.582 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.385 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.499 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.605 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.158 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'look', 'second', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271551724138 0.268076937826 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.137931034483 0.116061578633 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0560344827586 0.0759168565197 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0387931034483 0.0366838410393 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0129310344828 0.0131127313244 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133620689655 0.155750635184 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0431034482759 0.0379272487307 114% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45447461716 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0172413793103 0.0210936926555 82% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.137931034483 0.0948980150116 145% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00431034482759 0.00437022459523 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00862068965517 0.00967000014798 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1240.0 1161.00487805 107% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.9 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76744186047 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73763899035 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.358139534884 0.337110787985 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237209302326 0.247514529752 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139534883721 0.171178102325 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0976744186047 0.112407865282 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45447461716 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493023255814 0.546246751206 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.4158809038 49.3433353143 88% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 8.93414634146 146% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5384615385 23.0094962315 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5418397915 42.9750493124 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3846153846 135.714022679 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 23.0094962315 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.307692307692 0.689975730869 45% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 40.259391771 47.7609492067 84% => OK
Elegance: 2.36363636364 2.94281807926 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480705397126 0.418131533498 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110526040571 0.181151798455 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.049919116752 0.0850326197045 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.616634528876 0.706616315825 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145838490876 0.157042692854 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.248537926199 0.228904883108 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986094997406 0.108899403657 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.617455902839 0.367819155151 168% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00306565545508 0.0812612215331 4% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.407785442111 0.316326947829 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00717805637366 0.0921553760075 8% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.08536585366 220% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 3.02926829268 297% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 7.1512195122 182% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.