"Success in any realm of the life comes more often from taking chances or risks than careful and cautious planing".
As the given prompt shows that "Success in any realm of life comes more often taking chances or risks than from careful and cautious planing".I will partially support the given statement and partially oppose it.
Firstly, as the prompt mentions success can be achieved to those who are willing to take risk or chances,rather than choosing an careful and cautious plan of action.Because one who wants to attain a peak point or highest aim of his desire,he need to take risks and be determined and focused towards his work.No matter what comes to stop him,he should have to face it.A famous saying from an wrestler John cena is that "One should not back down for any challenge put for him".This shows that in order to achieve success, one should be willing to take risks and chances.
Secondly,as i am partially disagree with statement because taking risk to attain success is necessary.But if something doesn't work their should be plan of action to resolve it.If not then he is going to grounded.For, an example a Hilary made many comments against the trump about corruption,which is an deadly move.This can lead her to wining an election,but unfortunately trump proved himself that he is not corrupted.And he presented the evidences of Hilary to the jury,which made her to loose the elections.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
...from careful and cautious planing'.I will partially support the given statem...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mentions'' or 'mention's'?
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...ally oppose it. Firstly, as the prompt mentions success can be achieved to those who ar...
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... who are willing to take risk or chances,rather than choosing an careful and cautious p...
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Suggestion: Because
... an careful and cautious plan of action.Because one who wants to attain a peak point or...
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...determined and focused towards his work.No matter what comes to stop him,he should...
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...ld have to face it.A famous saying from an wrestler John cena is that 'One sh...
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Suggestion: This
...own for any challenge put for him'.This shows that in order to achieve success,...
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...ing to take risks and chances. Secondly,as i am partially disagree with statement ...
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Suggestion: I
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
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...nd chances. Secondly,as i am partially disagree with statement because taking risk to a...
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Suggestion: But
...ing risk to attain success is necessary.But if something doesnt work their should b...
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...n success is necessary.But if something doesnt work their should be plan of action to ...
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Suggestion: planned
...f something doesnt work their should be plan of action to resolve it.If not then he ...
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Suggestion: If
... should be plan of action to resolve it.If not then he is going to grounded.For, a...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... should be plan of action to resolve it.If not then he is going to grounded.For, a...
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Suggestion: ground
...o resolve it.If not then he is going to grounded.For, an example a Hilary made many comm...
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... it.If not then he is going to grounded.For, an example a Hilary made many comments...
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Suggestion: , which
...ments against the trump about corruption,which is an deadly move.This can lead her to ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nst the trump about corruption,which is an deadly move.This can lead her to wining...
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Suggestion: This
...bout corruption,which is an deadly move.This can lead her to wining an election,but ...
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....This can lead her to wining an election,but unfortunately trump proved himself that...
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Suggestion: And
...proved himself that he is not corrupted.And he presented the evidences of Hilary to...
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Suggestion: , which
...nted the evidences of Hilary to the jury,which made her to loose the elections.
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...of Hilary to the jury,which made her to loose the elections.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 218.0 442.535393258 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03669724771 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99382131736 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610091743119 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.2370786517 15% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 72.0 23.0359550562 313% => Sentence length is too long
Sentence length SD: 154.773669882 60.3974514979 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 366.0 118.986275619 308% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.6666666667 23.4991977007 309% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 5.21951772744 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365740076108 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.301912785132 0.0831039109588 363% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.243262268163 0.0758088955206 321% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301912785132 0.150359130593 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.243262268163 0.0667264976115 365% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.6 14.1392134831 273% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.86 48.8420337079 14% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 12.1743820225 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.14 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.38706741573 133% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 11.2143820225 275% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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