The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
There need not to be a my-way-or-highway approach for prompt that requires a much nunaced stance when it comes to very critical roles for functioning of its economy. It would be outright contentious if one is picked from the bowl of two seemingly divergent yet vital characterstics of any successful economy.
If competetion is banned or bridled outright with the young denizens of the society, it would render the society outright less competitive in global stage which would significantly hamper the progress of such a society. Many of the capitalistic nations like America is still the economic super power due to the fact that it requires it denizens to be competitive in the global stage and within the society all without comprimising working harmony of the society; there needs some cooperation when it comes national interest but not at the cost of losing an opportunity in the global stage. This is significantly required for a prosperous society else this would turn into a battleground of survival where competition outright kills everyone without cooperation as happened with collapse of soviet union.
A society just my merely instilling them a sense of cooperation would not achieve what its ought to achieve. Any sucessful leader can be cooperative and competitive at the same time. All the world leaders who are transforming the globe with unprecedented growth is achieving the harmony with competition in the global society. If the world nations not have been just vieing in the global society, the best of mankind inventions would be significantly lacking. Society might be just a harmonious place yet without any luxury which has siginficantly prospered the same society.
Leadership is a very crucial role in any functioning environment where there needs to be a sense of competition aligned with cooperation which determines the outcome of successful leader. Mahatma Gandi during his time in South Africa has negotiated the Ten point finger mandate with cooperation yet being competitive at the same time with the government on the goals, that needs to be achieved for the Indians living in South Africa. On other hand, Malcom who was intially hesistant with Martin Luther King Jr. idealogies turned back on his own notion of seperate America for colored when the civil rights moment achieved with coopertion rather than competition.
Both leaders of the siginificant past showcased that functioning of any successful environment be made without any comprise to one another quality of leadership. So, there needs no comprise on either of the quality to breed a sucessful leader. Everyone grows at their own pace of being competitive and cooperative and the world has still place for them, as leader, if they want to showcase the world as one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
There need not to be a my-way-or-highway approach for prompt...
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Line 9, column 339, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'placed'.
Suggestion: placed
...and cooperative and the world has still place for them, as leader, if they want to sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2327.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18262806236 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95259443536 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501113585746 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 741.6 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.8889977359 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.4375 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0625 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.21951772744 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136316049145 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496621182899 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513848790494 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800674305667 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194763346742 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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