These days, we have been bombarded with different kinds of advertisements. It is believed that the commercial advertisements which are shown on TV have some bad effects on the family members.
Discuss them.
Nowadays, we spend a majority of our time with social media such as the internet, magazines, televisions, etc. Therefore, some companies and producers use this opportunity to introduce their products and services, so we often encounter thousands of pictures, names, and brands. Many people believe that these commercial advertisements are a menace for family members and have some negative influences on them which are discussed as follows.
In my opinion, the first and the most important bad effect of commercials shown on TV is changing nutritional behavior into the unhealthy way, particularly in children. In our competitive business world,we usually see some advertisements about junk foods such as chips, snacks, soda, etc. that a variety of companies produce with fancy and attractive packagings, so they tempt many of their viewers especially the young ones. on the other hand, because there is no limitation in acceptance of any kind of commercials, maybe some of these products do not have the required certifications, and they are not confirmed by qualified authorities.
The second harmful impact of advertisements is decreasing self-confidence in people. For example, we see hundreds of commercials about losing or gaining weight products that cause us to be so sensitive about my appearance. In addition, many of these advertisements introduce some luxury object that we cannot afford to buy, so it can affect our self-confidence.
In conclusion, the television commercials have many bad effects on family members. To reduce these harmful influences, the parents should control their children in watching TV and nutritional behavior. Also, we can select the best products for us by investigating more about them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48880597015 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22994480441 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9481115683 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.153846154 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327553711312 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107649343139 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998171736273 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194771605187 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593622061386 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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