The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrates the proportion of water used by six areas namely: North America, South America , Europe, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia for industrial, agricultural and domestic use. Overall, it is clear that the highest amount of water is used for agricultural activities in the least industrialized regions, while the least ratio is used for domestic needs.
To begin with, in Africa, South America, Central and South-East Asia more than 70 percent of water goes to the agricultural sector, whereas in North America and Europe this index falls down to 39% and 32% respectively.On the opposite , North America and Europe consume more water for industrial purposes(48% and 53%), whereas industrial activities require only about 10% average in South America, Africa, Central and South-East Asia.
Finally , the highest amount of domestic water usage is in South America around 19%, whereas Asian regions use the lowest ratio, around 7%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40666666667 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72844309558 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => OK
Sentence length SD: 114.145466401 43.030603864 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.75 112.824112599 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5 22.9334400587 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11504868678 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902499172123 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488760204333 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088404339706 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648107682105 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.2329268293 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 61.2550243902 42% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.4329268293 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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