You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles (64 kilometers) away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose. Give specific reasons for your choice
By developing transportation technologies, people can access to wide variety of facilities to long and short travel. In fact, before everything, we should consider that these facilities are not distributed fairly among all cities. As a city become greater and prominent, it's transportation devices get more diverse. So, I consider that my city has all kind of transportation devices. With this regard, I think that I have access to personal car, between city buses and train. Each of these machines have some advantages and disadvantages.
First, personal car is more suitable but it is costly. The cost of gas is really high nowadays if your car burn a lot of it. In addition, by traveling such a short path by personal car, you can adjust your time. You do not need to go terminal and wait for bus or train. Furthermore, you have a complete authority in your car. You can stop to eat some food or drink tea whenever you want.
Second, between city buses are more economical than cars because many people travel by them, therefore, the rate of traveler to expenditures decrease. Although buses are cheaper, they have some limitations too. For example, if you need a W.C., you should wait for several hours. Furthermore, the seats in buses are so dense. If you are fat or seat near a fat person, you really have a trouble. In buses, you do not have any authority about eating or drinking. You should follow the driver's orders.
Third of all, trains are the cheapest one. In train, you have access to W.C. and seats are more convenient. But most of the trains are slow. If a car go a path in 2 hours, bus can reach it in 3 hours and train in 4 hours. So, you should be patient while traveling with trains. However, trains are safer than bus and car. In trains you can read your book, eat some food and drink a coffee. Even you can take a nap.
Personally, I prefer to travel this short path by my personal car. Although it costs more than bus and train and it is more dangerous, I love driving car in highways. Moreover, I really care about authority of doing things while traveling. I do not like to wait for a W.C. or ask driver to stop in nearest shop to buy some food. In addition, I really need to smoke hourly. Since smoking is forbidden in train and bus, I should use my personal car in travels.
To sum up, going to travel is getting easier every day. Faster trains, safer and convenient buses and hybrid cars offer us many options to travel. This is us that make the right decision based on our interests and situation. In my idea, in short distance, using personal car in more enjoyable and better than other transportation devices.
- TPO 20 Integrated 80
- People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. 73
- TPO-46 - Integrated Writing Task 73
- when people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country while some others keep their own customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer? Support your answer with specific details. 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 296, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the nearest'.
Suggestion: in the nearest
...o wait for a W.C. or ask driver to stop in nearest shop to buy some food. In addition, I r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, third, while, for example, i think, in addition, in fact, in short, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55857740586 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58389205184 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481171548117 0.524837075471 92% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 4.94265232975 324% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.6003584229 180% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 25.5053239261 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.8918918919 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9189189189 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45945945946 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 20.0 4.88709677419 409% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222078402687 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628040725372 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658174341598 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1302814989 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805084353296 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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