The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems. So who do you think should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organisation or each individuals?
Varieties of environmental problems increase recently. In my opinion, each individuals should take actions to resolve those issues in order to protect the habitat we are inhabiting in.
A person is the core of each societies. Everything that they do has significant impacts on the community so the little change from each individuals in their daily life, either positive or negative deeds, results in impacts on the environment. And this can lead to a immense effect if this person has a high position in the community or in a company. For example, If a person litters on the street which means he doesn’t care about keeping the street clean. When he becomes a director in a manufactures, he may not pay attention about environment regulations so that his company, at that time, may cause some remarkable problems to the environment. The consequences is now worse than ever.
In addition, a person is also a tutor and mentor for the next generation to teach them about protecting environment. Our offsprings usually learn from adults in the family, then from teachers and friends. Therefore, by taking responsibilities to solve environmental issues, and transmit that idea to the next generation, each individual is solving the problems gradually.
In conclusion, individuals should be the ones who are responsible to tackle environment problems because they participate in every aspects of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n the environment. And this can lead to a immense effect if this person has a hig...
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Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a manufacture' or simply 'manufactures'?
Suggestion: a manufacture; manufactures
...et clean. When he becomes a director in a manufactures, he may not pay attention about environ...
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Line 3, column 671, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...ms to the environment. The consequences is now worse than ever. In addition, a ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ual is solving the problems gradually. In conclusion, individuals should be the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25221238938 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1432035009 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615044247788 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.325123152709 308% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4522931392 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9166666667 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184416120797 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584616185097 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702003679818 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121182827826 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048768173215 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.