The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose and can even be damaging. To waht extent do do agree or disagree?
Many people belive that all kinds of advertisements should be prohibited as they bring no practical values and even negatively affect customers. While the excessive proliferation of commercials may exert detrimental impacts on people, I still belive that the governments should not impose a ban on advertising.
On the one hand, the surge in the quantities of advertisements can have a negative influence on consumers. First, rather than being well-informed bout a new line of products, people now are bombarded with all kinds of advertisements not only on TV but also on the Internet. Such information overload has become a disturbance to many people, especially when their favorite TV programmes are interrupted by irrelevant promotions. Second, some attractive endorsements, which consist of stunning pictures, special effects and strong messages can also encourage people to purchase things that they do not really need. For instance, many young woman are tempted to buy a large number of cosmetic products in order to become more beautiful. However, in reality, most of these products are of little use to consumers.
On the other hand, I still belive that it would be a grave detriment to society if all forms of advertising were banned as advertisements play a vital role in creating free market and healthy economy. The basic function of advertisements is to inform people about newly launched products, which is significant for those who are still unware of such products. This means that consumers will have more option to choose, enabling them to purchase better products with cheaper prices. In addition, advertising is also an effective way which business use to promoite their products or services in order to approach potential customers. If governments imposed a ban on all kinds of advertisements, these companies would be pushed to the verge of bankruptcy. This could greatly damage the national economy and result in an increase in unemployment rate.
In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks of commercials, there should not be a prohibition against all forms of advertising.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, still, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31437125749 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13031791412 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586826347305 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7321792057 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199442889128 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600909130995 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562579365867 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114833823352 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242298447566 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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