Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports. While others think that people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Sports play a vital role in human life as they provide people countless opportunities for fitness, recreation and entertainment. However, some sports pose great dangers to many individuals. While many people argue that it is necessary for governments to ban hazardous activities, I still belive that people should be at liberty to choose sports of their preferences.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people think that governmants should impose a ban on dangerous sports.First, extreme sports are often quite challenging and require tremendous physical strength and agility, which carries more potential health risks for players. In fact, this kind of sports might be a grave detriment to human ' health and put people' life at risk. Second, individuals, especially those who show affection for taking risks, can be addicted to dangerous sports. An excessive amount of time could be spent on hazardous activities if people are eposed to them on a frequent basis. This could lead to the reduction of time for study and work, which should be people's top priority.
On the other hand, I still side with those who argue that people should have freedome to choose which sports they take part in. In fact, many individuals certainly opt for playing sports which provide them with a great deal of relaxation and joy. If their favourite kinds of sports were prohibited, it would lead to undesirable outcomes, especially a resentment and negative attitudes towards life. Additionally, people, regardless of gender or financial background, should be at liberty to do any sports or activities. In other words, individuals should have freedom to make their own desicions about which sports they play, according to their interests and abilities so that they can feel that they are respected and listened to.
In conclusion, while imposing a ban on dangerous sports is necessary to ensure the safety of people, I still belive that people should have the right to take part in any sports they like.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, still, while, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14417177914 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80994320177 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530674846626 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.762850258 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.785714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336024930544 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119010340366 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075643093467 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223870010642 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236253140389 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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