Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
The accelerating rate of metropolitian population has become a matter of concern in recent years. Although there are some noticeable impacts of this phenomenon, measures can be taken to mitigate them.
To begin, the most detrimental effects of population growth is the worse living condition. As cities are filled with people, it is impossible to provide everyone with jobs and basic neccessities. A further impact of metropolitian overcrowding is the acceleration in the level of social evils. Since it is hardly for those on a low income to make ends meet, city dwellers have to take desperate measures, which might include illegal activities, to afford their lives. For instance, numerous ill manner behaviours such as vandalism and robbery can take place. This will also fortify the belief of the citizens that governments fail to ensure social security leading to social instability, causing social unrests and conflicts.
However, several actions that governments and citizens could be taken to solve the aforementioned problems. First of all, governments can impose laws on controlling birth rate, which has proved to be effective over the last decades in some countries such as China. A second measure which can be applied is illegal immigration deterrent. As more and more people from undeveloped areas move to fast-growing cities for better living standard even without permission of the Bureau, it is necessary to stop their action. Finally, the government should relocate business facilities and infrastructure to rural areas in order to attract citizens to countryside and relieve pressure for housing policies in cities.
In conclusion, although it is evident that rapid increasing population has inevitable harmful influences, various measures can be taken to tackle with this worrying issue.
- Some people think that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 84
- Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organization, while others think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 84
- Some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- University education should be free to everyone regardless of income To what extent do you agree or disagree 68
- Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world.What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and citizens could be taken to solve the aforementioned problems. First of all, g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49642857143 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98519946006 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.838961547 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.928571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0967033832414 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310149406959 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303548226253 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528199108412 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311616565338 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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