Some people think that computers and the Internet are more important for a child's education than going to school. But others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn effectively. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Using technology has broke new ground in educating offsprings, while some still think that traditional teaching and learning methods are more effective and efficient. In my perspective, the majority of offline learners will be provided with more oppotunities to develop their interpersonal skills, rather than online learners
On the one hand, studying aids and cyberspace have become widely available to adolescents which perhaps, changed the way youngsters interact with each other , especially with their loved ones. Besides, thanks to advanced technology, kids enjoy learning more such as using laptops and online presentations to make studying environment more interactive and compelling. Furthermore, internet connection makes distance learning more accessible and effortless than ever before. Taking online courses is a prime example as the traditional curriculum does not provide much to feed the hunger for knowledge of specific field.
On the other hand, it seems that there is no substitute for a face to face interaction between students and teachers due to its practical communication. Not only that but also getting schooled prepared students for future life situation by giving them necessary skills and knowledge to function as an individual member of society. In this protected environment, pupils can study intensively with caring and well-informed teachers which also promote the student’s physical, psychological, intellectual and emotional development. We all know that offline courses give learners superior quality that make it more expensive and cost-prohibitive for some to apply than online courses, especially in developing countries
Overall, though studying via internet and devices gain accessibility in education, I believe studying under the guidance of real teachers should be prefered for everyone
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, still, well, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88432835821 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12923280587 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679104477612 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.6516277973 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.222222222 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7777777778 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22629117664 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868646549437 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410818024008 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124049697443 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321302327868 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 16.66 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.42 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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