the surest indicator of a great nation is represented by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientest not by the general walfare of its people.
write a respeonse in which you discuss the extent that you agree or disagree. In developing or supporting you position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not be hold ture.
The statement contends that the achievement of elites like rulers, artists, or scientists in a nation is the sureset indicator of a great nation. Some people might think that the acheivement of elites can be most important indicatior. But the following essay will argue that it is plausible to disagree with the argument in some ways.
Admittedly, I agree that the achievements of elites of a nation sometimes might represent the greatness of the nation. Because the great nation can invest its social economic resource to producing elites like rulers, artists, or scientists. For example, the developed country like US has produced many elites. In turn, And, the elites have contributed to the nation's greatness. So the achievements of some elites can be representatives in certain way.
However, I don't agree that the achievements of elites have the sureset representativeness. There is the way the acheivement of elites might not be due to the contribution of nations. For example, Miss Kim, a famous figure skating player in Korea, has made a splendid work without the support of Korea. In this case, the outcome does not represent the greatness of nation. Plus, the elites might contribute the greatness of nation. For instance, There was great ruler, President No, in korea. But he have little influence in korea because of the rigidness of society. Considering in these ways, I disagree that the acheivement of elites is the surest indicator of greatness of society.
Furthermore, The general welfare of people in the nation might be sometimes more indicative of the greatness of the nation. Because the great nation tend to invest its resource to improve general welfare of its people. Thus, I disagree that the achievement of elites can be more indicative than the general well being of its people.
In summary, I think that the acheivement of some elites does not always represent the greatness of nation considering several ways I mentioned. So I disagree with the statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...And, the elites have contributed to the nations greatness. So the achievements of some ...
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Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...entatives in certain way. However, I dont agree that the achievements of elites h...
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Line 5, column 500, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...t ruler, President No, in korea. But he have little influence in korea because of th...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...icative of the greatness of the nation. Because the great nation tend to invest its res...
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Line 9, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oned. So I disagree with the statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 326.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13190184049 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95194840703 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420245398773 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0624474252 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5238095238 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243172718138 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855728825764 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079223790655 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153424989022 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729327875777 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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