In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports (swimming, boating and fishing) among their favorite recreational activities. The Mason River flowing through the city is rarely used for these pursuits, however, and the city park department devotes little of its budget to maintaining riverside recreational facilities. For years there have been complaints from residents about the quality of the river's water and the river's smell. In response, the state has recently announced plans to clean up Mason River. Use of the river for water sports is therefore sure to increase. The city government should for that reason devote more money in this year's budget to riverside recreational facilities.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on the assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The author's conclusion that, as the water sports are one of the favorite recreational activities, the city government should devote more money in this year's budget is flawed. In the argument, the author assumes that the most important part of the government's budget is to support people's desires for recreational activities rather than the actual need for doing so. Furthermore, the author doesn't consider the fact that the complaint for the river's water quality and smell doesn't directly mean as an indicator of the decrease in the water sports as I list them out below.
To begin, the report points out that as the river, apart from being used for recreational activities, is rarely used for other activities. It also states that the city government devotes a little budget for maintaining it. In doing so, the author is assuming that these two facts have direct connection as evident in the conclusion. This makes the scenario ill-stated. The complaints for cleaning up of the river may not only for the recreational activities but also, for the health hazards it brings. The city government hence has to clean up the river to avoid its consequences. Cleaning up of a large water body reservoir doesn't have to be every year, and hence need not have to be an integral part of the budget.
Additionally, the increment of the money being devoted to riverside activities ignores many other areas in which the
city has to look through. The fact that recreation comes in the end of all basic requirement of necessities is an testimony to this fact. Without knowing the total budget, its allocations, constraints as well as other internal factors of the city, such an demand to increase in money for recreational attributes doesn't seem fit. What can be done is that the people who regularly visit the river for such activities should form a core committee and meet the government representative with their requirements. They should discuss the requirements of cleaning up of the river and how much cost the city can endure without deviating from the other basic requirements. The need of the hour is to first address the more intense requirements of the city rather than adressing the issue of a handful of people in the city.
I believe the issue of cleaning up the Mason river is required more, not for the recreational activities, rather than the health hazards it can cause if ignored. The city residents who play the water sports regularly can form a volunteering club for the helping the city government in cleaning up the river with financial help from the government as well as their own fund. Not only will this, make the river clean for the sports played, it will not put any significant dent in the city's budget for the year. This can also develop part time jobs for the locals and hence serve a larger purpose.
The argument hence can be further strengthened by the fact that how grave the dangers are to the health of the residents because of the sport water of the river. It can be further bolstered by pointing the employment it can generate if some
people are employed for maintaining the cleanliness of the river. As it stands, however, the argument of allocating more funds for the river for recreational activities is flawed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, apart from, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 55.5748502994 115% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2701.0 2260.96107784 119% => OK
No of words: 556.0 441.139720559 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85791366906 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.56307096286 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73117240425 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 204.123752495 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43345323741 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 830.7 705.55239521 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.471057884232 212% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.76447105788 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6902945368 57.8364921388 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.434782609 119.503703932 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1739130435 23.324526521 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65217391304 5.70786347227 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286823161773 0.218282227539 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925769211616 0.0743258471296 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623900648939 0.0701772020484 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140329434824 0.128457276422 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721794268891 0.0628817314937 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.3799401198 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.3550499002 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.5979740519 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 98.500998004 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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