Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Nowadays, the number of crimes that are committing in each society, apart from being serious or petty crimes, is on the increase. Unfortunately, a big number of criminals re-offend after they release into society. There are some key reasons for this issue that will be discussed and for sure some measures should be taken by the governments and individuals to tackle this problem.
The main causes for committing a crime are poverty, unemployment and lack of education. Many of the criminals often have no other way of making a living after releasing from prison which leads to committing other crimes. The prison system makes the situation worse, since offenders mix with other prisoners can have negative influences. As an example, a drug dealer may tempt a thief to try some kinds of drugs to be more relaxed in the prison and this may have devastating effects in the future. In addition, a criminal record makes finding a job more difficult so many prisoners re-offend after they are released.
To tackle this problem some measures should be taken by the governments. Firstly, prisons should provide education, skill and vocational training. Besides, rehabilitating programs prepare prisoners for release into society. Moreover, community service would be beneficial for prisoners to feel useful in the society by cleaning the public area or talking to schools. Furthermore, offenders will have some difficulties finding accommodation and work, so the family and friends should help them with these issues.
To conclude, the lack of welfare in the society can cause some significant problems which should be tackled to prevent more severe difficulties in the future. More effort is needed to have a crimeless society in which everyone can enjoy the peace and security.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23776223776 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7922245911 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555944055944 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1745240835 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310227668122 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105246666106 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744688321963 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187241944254 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666340523456 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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