Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they heve a greater role in raising children in most societies.Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.State your point of view
Childrens will grow up in the best way if both father and mother carry out their function effectively.However,lots of people argue that women nurture their kids efficiently than men.According to me,both of women and men also have a vital part on bring up their offspring.
It is undeniable that the important of father in bring children up.Firstly,men usually teach their kids how to repair something or fight spirit in worst situation by hardiness way.Secondly,the father also put disciplines on studies,playing games,indoor or outdoor activities,getting up in the morning.This would be generate good habit for childrens.In addition,men have more responsibility to their family financially so they can provide the best condition finance which helps them studying in good university or even starting their own business.
However,one children just developt completely if have an impact from their mother.The main reason why I suppose that women plays an important role in nurturing their children stemming from their nine month of pregnancy.Besides,mother also have sensitivity to find what problem their childs facing up.For example,teenagers usually have first love with same or different sex friends.On this time,mother will be the best suitable person in family for children sharing emotion and being given meaningful advice.Another things children can be received from their mother is clever in sewing and cooking.
In conclusion,I still believe that both father and mother are equally important in children’s formative edge.Even if the way father or mother teach children is not the same,there’ll be a huge impact on their offspring.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, another thing, for example, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68548387097 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70665199211 2.80592935109 132% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616935483871 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.718314888 49.4020404114 329% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 352.5 106.682146367 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.0 20.7667163134 299% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.5 7.06120827912 489% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131216813297 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882861743396 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039264024496 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882861743396 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039264024496 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.4 13.0946893788 278% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.09 50.2224549098 0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 11.3001002004 254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.61 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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