Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes?
There has been a growing debate as to whether overseas tourism brings negative impacts on the host country. There are several explanations behind that and some solutions should be considered to change some pessimistic points.
It is undeniable that there are bad effects due to the growth of international tourism. Many people think that international travel is a negative thing for their place. One of the most noticeable explanation is that the highly rising crime rate affects their country’s security. If people can easily travel to other countries in the world, more and more people will go to developed countries illegally to find jobs and they might cause bad evils when cannot getting an ideal job in the competitive market. Moreover, the environment of the host country can be destroyed. For instance, low awareness tourists travel to other countries and they throw away trash and garbage on a ground on the sea instead of trash cans.
On the other hand, overseas travel could be beneficial to their country so there are several methods to alter the negative thoughts. Firstly, the government should impose stricter policies in order to limit the number of persons those who have bad potentials to their country, which means that the attitudes of residents should be more positive. Furthermore, the huge advantages of international tourism should be shown to dwellers on public media.
In conclusion, there are several reasons why many people think that their country would have bad effects on oversea travel. Nevertheless, international travel is also good so some effort should be made to change their pessimistic attitudes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
There has been a growing debate as to whether overseas tourism brings negative impact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25757575758 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79403758126 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560606060606 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.315984614 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.769230769 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306619941992 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112071472584 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960137100948 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176576680224 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305562714529 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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