Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People differ in their opinion if we need to learn history. Many people think that history subject is not important. However, I disagree with such views because I strongly believe that our past teaches us more about the present. Hence, when people say that learning from past time does not make sense for present living, I totally disagree.
First, I think learning mistakes from past is one way to make better future. Some people who always learn from the past will not do the same thing again. They try to analyse the cause of mistakes and try to repair their own mistakes. Thus, people can choose to learn history.
On the other hand, others believe that the past teaches us nothing. Because they don’t want to remember your past mistakes and miss the point.
To summarise, it can be said that it is important for future. Because learning from past can make people more careful to face their present lives, so, they have power to face the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...nce, when people say that learning from past time does not make sense for present living,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, thus, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75595238095 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09827127582 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8681272831 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.5833333333 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187115116748 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687159028853 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459674815932 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115430841005 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333911927596 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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