An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries.
What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
A considerable amount of licensed individuals on their own respective professions such as doctors and teachers are going abroad to work in more progressive nations that their country of origin. The underlying drawback of this is lesser professionals will be left behind, yet it can be mitigated by increasing their salary and improving one's benefits.
To begin with, certain career oriented people will look for more opportunities in a foreign land. This phenomena may result to decrease in the number of skilled individuals who can render service to their own country. For example, nurses are in demand in UK and Canada so they tend to grab that opportunity to work there, consequently, the quantity of nurses available for instance in the Philippines will decline.
Nonetheless, working outside one's homeland can be avoided by upgrading salary grades. The government has all the power to do such alignment and allocating additional budget for public service professionals. The amount of work they are providing should deserve a well-paid compensation and must be offered with promising benefits such security and health. To illustrate this, teachers nowadays are being highly paid by the administration to ensure the quality of education that they are giving to their students.
In conclusion, even though skilled and educated workforce tends to find better opportunities abroad that may lead in reducing their number to provide service to one's home country, this can still be solved by increasing their salary and improving the government's mandatory benefits for them. In reality, innumerable of these social groups would still remain steadily to offer great service to their fellowmen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, look, may, nonetheless, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44905660377 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94701277575 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4688506139 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.272727273 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.25397266985 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200448096321 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772426666263 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478776407317 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127590319717 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355411424692 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.