To understand most important characteristics of a society,one must study its major cities.
Society is described by important characteristics such as standard of living, people's way of life, their values, their food,thier clothing etc.In a nation,major cities have most of the working population which influence the nation's development.But these important characteristics of the society differ from region to region.One cannot comprehend all these important characteristics of all societies by just studying the major cities.As the people living in rural areas differ in great contrast from the people living in major cities.Also people living in one major city have different characteristics than people in another city.
Most of the people in rural areas have smaller goals which are confined to their area.While, the people in major cities dream of making big, have goals at global scale.Also facilities provided in major cities are way more than in rural areas.One gets modern facilities like better transport facilities, availability of variety of products, better educational facilities etc which rural areas lack.This affects the way of life in both regions.People in rural areas may be living in big houses but their earning is way less as compared to the people in major cities.They earn more but have smaller homes.Also people in major cities have a fast-paced lives whereas people in rural areas have comparatively laid back lives.
We can consider an example, where people in some rural areas have bacward thinking.They give less importance to a girl's education while in major cities you can observe girls faring better than boys in many competetive exams.Rural people have a thinking that in a girl's life, bearing children is the most important purpose of her life.They treat her education as secondary thing whereas home activities are given utmost importance.In contrast, people in major cities treat both boys and girls equally.Education here is considered essential for a child's development.
While differences are stark in major cities and rural areas,there are also differences between major cities.Their traditions and way of life also differ at great extent depending on their locations.For example,people in northen regions have heavy diet of meat,diary etc as they have colder climate while people in southern regions have lighter diets to ambat heat.We can consider major cities like mumbai and delhi, where we can spot differences in their food, clothing, way of talking etc.
Therefore, for understanding a society's important characteristics, one cannot just study major cities.As differences can be spotted every kilometer as we ove forward.One ha to individally study societies for better understanding of its important characteristics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2268.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54523227384 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15685323502 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486552567237 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 23.0359550562 352% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.959865772 60.3974514979 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 453.6 118.986275619 381% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.8 23.4991977007 348% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.6 5.21951772744 376% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 7.80617977528 461% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219746156168 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154475926945 0.0831039109588 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103185403641 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154475926945 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103185403641 0.0667264976115 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.6 14.1392134831 323% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -27.66 48.8420337079 -57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.92365168539 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.2 12.1743820225 306% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.09 12.1639044944 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.82 8.38706741573 141% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 11.2143820225 307% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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