In many country, a small number of people earn extremtly high salaries.Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views ad give your own opinion.
There are always a few special person with an extremtly high income in each country. Some people suppose that the governments need to administer a limit for salaries level, but I believe that a special high salary for talent person ought to be unlimited.
On the one hand, the distance between rich and poor will be shorter with a policy of restricting high salaries. This might leads to the more stable economic, and also reduce competition in working environment. For instance, people tend to settle down yourself when they can’t obtain a higher salary according national regulation, therefore, there is less competition in national office.
On the other hand, it seems to me that there are variety of reasons why he governments should permit the unlimited salaries. Firstly, the person who had high salaries will contribute a great deal of money on taxes, therefore, the government can spent more money on public construction as hospitals, schools, or entertainment areas. Secondly, if people can get a extremtly high salaries, they could get more motivation on their job , they will perceive their huge responsibility for developing their job. Futhermore, the more achievement you made, the more money you earn, this is a basic principle of life.
In consclusion , it seems to me that maintain an extremtly salaries for talent people who deserve to have, is better than limit their income under a certain level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13793103448 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82628262477 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599137931034 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5030378579 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.2 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239965635725 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892473626853 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530736680797 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14765697246 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498387152984 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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