Independent writing, TPO 24
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the modern world gaining sufficient income is a pivotal issue that everyone must consider. Some parents believe that encouraging their teenagers to have income from that time is a practice for them for the future, some others say that is not the suitable age to begin the occupation and their kids must have pleasure time. I personally believe that it can be effective for teenagers to start their own business from the lower ages due to following reasons.
To begin with, responsibility will be the north worthy of this movement for young people. It is not necessary to mention that, we need responsible and hard-working people in our society to develop our culture of working efficiently and have such human resources for whom the future of the community is important. Therefore, it is necessary to prepare workable and responsible human sources from lower ages among youth.
In addition, all of the people need to prepare themselves for the future opportunity which will be suitable for them. The job, which they like and enjoy from. So, in my idea, if a person enters to the workplace sooner than others, not only be familiar with the work environment but also can choose the best way for academic and working continuously.
At the final point, teenagers do not know the value of the money their parents get unless they are engaged in this issue by initiating new occupation and be independent of their parents. This phenomenon will be helpful either for children and parents. I mean, youth do not rely on their parent’s money for their accommodations, their college’s tuition fee and other things they need besides, parents can spend that money for other important materials for the life. I have experience of independence in my life and understand the meaning of having your own job and getting money and spend or save it as you like.
In conclusion, I agree with the statement that part-time job can be assistant for teenage children to prepare for the adult life and I strongly suggest parents that let their children be independent of younger ages to be the responsible and effective person in the society. Also, they can prepare well for the future job and can choose the best during getting more experience and it cannot deniable that they will be the grateful person for their parents rather than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, well, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89898989899 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.692904476 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492424242424 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8784635656 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30325579828 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102125206773 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077695887505 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170914941286 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871284884176 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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