Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts as a companion. What is your opinion?
The role of TV is irrefutable whereas it began an essential part of spreading news and events from miles away. While some people think it is an indispensable part of our life, opponents hold an opposing view. I am highly inclined to believe that the role of TV is far beneficial. Following paragraphs will assert both sides by providing some academic evidence before concluding.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why I support the importance of TV in our life. Firstly, it provides us loads of different information about travels, economics, education, societies and new technology in the format of amusing programs. Secondly, TV admirer uses an essential valid logic to say how TV can broaden our horizon to the life and world with a wide variety of documentary programs. According to an academic research conducted by Tehran University, watching different TV programs could be beneficial for retired persons in term of the mental and psychological situation while it reduces the chance of getting Alzheimer.
On the other hand, TV has its own negative aspects. Clearly, it could bring some eyesight problems if the watching time rose up. Furthermore, it might lead to aggressive behavior in children who spend lots of their precious time on actions movies. Not to mention that, without parental supervision, it could be detrimental to students while they prevent social and educational activity in return to watching TV. For instance, in 2015 in the US, 27% of crime occurred by juveniles who attend more than 3 hours fighting program on TV.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that, TV is like a double-edged sword and have both advantageous and disadvantageous effects. It could play a pivotal role in our modern lifestyle if we are able to use it in an appropriate way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...dern lifestyle if we are able to use it in an appropriate way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02684563758 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96505327466 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647651006711 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2420614348 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8666666667 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215867087483 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670281560297 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621894271335 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123420862046 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754074558976 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.