Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
It is irrefutable that the consumerism has become a controversial trend all around the world. While some opponents argued that it might lead to major detrimental effects on small retailers, adherents of shopping malls state different views. Considering the increasing trend of shopping center instruction, I profoundly inclined to believe that these huge stores are truly an advancement in these days lifestyle. This essay will analysis both sides by providing some academic evidence before concluding.
On the one hand, there are several obvious reasons why shopping mall followers tend to buy their needs from these kinds of facilities. Firstly, shopping mall is a collection of small retailers, restaurants, entertainments and other public facilities gathered in a large area, which could bring many ease to consumers. Secondly, due to their easy accessible locations corresponding with wide range of available parking slots with low fee, it is make easier for customers to visit and spend some quality time with their family and friends. From my own experience, Palladium shopping center, one of the biggest in Middle East, provide all sort of different facilities and accommodation in an interesting place.
On the other hands, according to opponents of shopping centers, there are many disadvantages come along with them. Primarily, many small shops in local areas are forcing to close because of the lack of customers. Furthermore, according to an academic research conducted by Tehran University, due to some heavy seasonal discounts offered by these shopping malls, not only many people are gathering in a crowded place but also it could lead to traffic conjunction on that area.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that, while some people tend to argued that shopping malls are not valuable, I highly believe that they are some part of hectic lifestyle of modern world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 397, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun ease seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much ease', 'a good deal of ease'.
Suggestion: much ease; a good deal of ease
...ered in a large area, which could bring many ease to consumers. Secondly, due to their ea...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'closing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: closing
... small shops in local areas are forcing to close because of the lack of customers. Furth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.367003367 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90860374397 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616161616162 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2224858393 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.833333333 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165596646285 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601774368533 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360008322917 0.071462118173 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943024069283 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310815480112 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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