The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheapand clean energy.The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap
and clean energy.
The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Submitted by RA99 on Tue, 01/02/2018 - 16:05

It is no doubt that nuclear energy has become more and more utilized by countries all over the world for its great advantages. It is used as a source of energy to generate electricity, desalinate water, and to create super weapons.

It is argued by many people and experts in nuclear engineering that the continuous production and innovation of weapons that use nuclear energy is putting the world in constant danger. For instance, take Kim Jung Un the supreme leader of North Korea, as a ruler who is continuously developing his nuclear missiles and launching them to different sites, and as a person who does not consider international laws and countries, he is becoming a major risk of world safety.

Moreover, countries which have nuclear weapons seem to dominate the world in general. This could mean that if all countries implement new ways and methods of creating nuclear weapons, it might result in complete chaos.

In conclusion, I feel inclined to agree that the advantages of nuclear power outweigh its dangers, and because we are expected to run out of some natural resources like petroleum, coal, and gasoline, I think nuclear power might become essential in the future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... water, and to create super weapons. It is argued by many people and experts in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in general, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03535353535 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7420707773 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631313131313 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7509866248 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.428571429 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244488906552 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112175464827 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680080518019 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141973096888 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424856718682 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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