the graph below shows the number of enquiries received by Tourist Information Office in one city a six-month period in 2011
the line graph compares the number of questions that one particular Tourist Information Office received through three different channels: telephone, letter/email and direct communication during the first six months of 2011.
Overall, the office received substantially more enquiries made via telephone and directly from tourists, as opposed to gradually weaker preference for mailing platforms throughout the timescale given.
Tourist sent about 900 questions through telephone to the office, which was the largest number in January. This figure then experienced a slight dip of 100 before rising back to 1000 both in March and in April, followed by a steep increase to reach approximately 1600 enquiries in June. Likewise, the number of in oerson questions registered the most dramatic growth from only 450 to 1900 enquiries, making face to face communication the most common way to obtain travel information.
Written enquiries saw an opposite trend. Specifically, after having reamained relatively stable at about 700 for the first 3 months, the figure haved to merely 350 questions in May and in June alike.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, likewise, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91468699762 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701754385965 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1604528691 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.714285714 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22645102292 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909501457823 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112216955388 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135549728334 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129638347324 0.0819641961636 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.