The claim that animals have “rights” has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?
The topic of animals’ rights has been a heated topic of debate since the 1970s. People claim that putting animals in zoos are not giving animals their rights and should be banned. However, I believe that the zoos are in fact doing their best to preserve and promote the awareness of animals. Therefore, I disagree with the idea that zoos should be banned.
Majority of the animals that are placed in zoos are species which are facing extinction. The reason as to why they are placed in zoos is because these animals require shelter to prolong the continuation of their species. Zoos play their role and provide food and care for these animals every day. Although some people may think that zoos mistreat animals and only use them as a source of income, I strongly disagree with these.
Secondly, zoos are also a good way to promote the awareness of these animals. Many people around the world do not realize the importance of certain species in our ecosystem. Therefore, a zoo is a good place to promote and share the importance of playing our roles and helping these animals to prolong their species. This advertisement is best when introduced to children as that will lead them to understanding the importance as they grow older
In conclusion, I believe that zoos should not be banned and should continue to be funded. This is because zoos are playing an important role in spreading information regarding animal lives and they are not taking away the animals’ rights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84251968504 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56848655715 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484251968504 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6318439843 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6153846154 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411762237643 0.242375264174 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157155226522 0.0925447433944 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808399565979 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26957680588 0.151781067708 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119641291315 0.0609392437508 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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