Online shopping is destroying local businesses.
Online shopping is increasing dramatically over the past years and spreading all over the world. Even though some argue it destroying and closing the market of local business, others think online shopping has many advantages over local businesses. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping with regard to local business.
Online shopping has many advantages over local businesses as it releases the burden of going every shop to choose desired goods by allowing people to select goods while sitting in the living room. This will contribute to reduced traffic and usage of fossil fuel in vehicles as it saves time and energy. For example, people can order any product using eBay or Amazon and can get it delivered to the home without going outside shopping. In sum, online shopping has many advantages for people in current society.
In contrast, there are several disadvantages of online shopping as it will diminish the market of local business while putting people in a danger of buying bad quality product. When people buy everything using online shopping, there will not be any business for local business people and they will be unemployed. For instance, people can’t feel the quality of any online buying product and one of my friends order a dress and received dress can’t be wore by him due to lack of quality. In short, there are several disadvantages of online shopping.
This essay discussed advantages of online shopping as it eases the burden of outdoor shopping and disadvantages as it forces to buy unknown quality products while destroying local business. In my opinion, there are many advantages of online shopping though it diminishes local business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
...shopping and disadvantages as it forces to buy unknown quality products while destroyi...
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Line 4, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng though it diminishes local business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, in short, in my opinion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17985611511 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65772572507 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467625899281 0.580463131201 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4026149241 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422865034191 0.242375264174 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179943880655 0.0925447433944 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131621352856 0.071462118173 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303336396406 0.151781067708 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132963888556 0.0609392437508 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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