People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
Nowadays, university admission has been one of the most significant parts of students' life in order to acquire knowledge or better job opportunities. It is clear that there would be much more reasons that conduct students for further education which we will discuss throughout this essay.
First of all, one of the most important reasons for attending university might be the essence of having certificates for jobs. It means, better job prospects and higher incomes require higher education. According to my personal experience, when I was a university student, I could not be employed in prestigious companies due to the fact that I did not finish my education and the company needs a certificate for recruitment. Furthermore, not only are certificates beneficial for career opportunities but also act as a proof of person's qualifications. For instance, in some job interviews regardless how you would be able to answer the technical questions, they seek for university certificate as an evidence for approval.
Secondly, there is some other reason such as parent's obligation that leads students to further education and university enrollments. In many cultures high educational level of youngsters is extremely important for families which mean parents provide any necessity for their children's education that makes avoiding further education become less acceptable to them. For instance, a scientific research has asserted that children in developing countries face a lot of pressure related to their educational issues because of their parents' expectations. Moreover, there would be some other factors such as peer pressure rather than parents caused youth to further education. For illustration, those students with no specific goals might follow their peers and attend university as an imitation action, not for particular achievements. Hence, it is correct to presume that in some cultures and societies there are some irrational reasons for higher education such as parents or peer pressure.
To conclude, although there are several reasons for attending colleges and universities such as improving knowledge or better job prospects, continuing education has some other less popular reasons. Therefore, it might be because of a piece of paper like certificate or parent's pressure for further education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'scientific research'.
Suggestion: scientific research
... less acceptable to them. For instance, a scientific research has asserted that children in developin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1207.87684729 163% => OK
No of words: 354.0 242.827586207 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56214689266 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06350820326 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536723163842 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 379.143842365 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0097007494 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.266666667 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2408532786 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925900949392 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704148868173 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163014849386 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505883181788 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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