“In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed”. Does a common man suffer from a group’s ideology? Express your opinion, and support the same with reasons and examples.
The decisions which are made by a particular group and their effects on citizen's lives has become a controversial issue among the public. Although it is regarded by a considerable number of inhabitants as throughly both constructive and positive, others hold opponents view. I am inclined to profoundly believe that these ideas have some permanent effects on settlers' lives as they could make some people to die.
There are several reasons why some decisions which are made by a particular group of people might be quite hazardous. Namely, in some developing countries specifically in the dictorate ones, some legislation make populations do some activities that can create some confrontations and big problems including interfer to the internal issues in other countries can create a considerable number of problems and even lead to war. Hence, it is quite clear that in the war a plothera of people face hazardous situations and they might die.
On the one hand, if these ideas make in appropriate ways, they will be beneficial and prevent an array of problems and war. For instance, these decisions can guide people to have more responsibilites and respect others. Not only is it possible to prevent confrontation by making suitable decisions but also we can expand our relationships and create many trades instead of war.
In conclusion, while this topic might have some drawbacks, I much prefer to have a government which creates happiness instead of violence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1974789916 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98867114535 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579831932773 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.155231279 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.7 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.05495788833 0.242375264174 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265123657227 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229691177545 0.071462118173 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0306043155167 0.151781067708 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212786071526 0.0609392437508 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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