Modern technology is now very common in most work places.
How do you think this has changed the way we work?
Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?
Since the beginning of the 21st century, using of the modern technology has spread widely throughout the world, and people depend on this technology in their lifestyle. Some people believe that this modern technology affect people lives widely, and it helps them in performing their tasks, while others argue that depending on this technology widely has a bad impact on the people lives. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages on using modern technology widely in people lives.
Using modern technology has a positive impact on people lives. People now can perform their tasks faster. For example, the design of any building in the past was taking a lot of time, which was extended to more than three months, but now the design using the computer is only taking few hours. Therefore, it seems clear that using the computer has aided people to perform their tasks much faster than in the past.
On the other hand, some people think that using the technology could affect on people lives badly, nowadays, people depend on computers a lot. Recent research, which was conducted in the Washington University, has shown that 87% of American people use computers in their calculations, and they stop
doing any simple calculation. Thus, it seems clear that depending on the computer technology widely leads them to become very lazy, and consequently affects their lives badly.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the positive and negative signs of using modern technology widely in our lives. In my opinion, I believe that using the modern technology should be in balance, and people should not depend on their computers widely in doing their tasks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... computers widely in doing their tasks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1684981685 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48993196027 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.931034482759 644% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3543733287 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.583333333 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157652283221 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798863503205 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418893894394 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10204151609 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421225327583 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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