Nowadays tv has become an essential part of life. Medium to
spread news and awareness and for some it acts like a
companion. What is your Opinion about this ?
The importance of television and its role on spreading news, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of watching television for prolonged time has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on people and their opinions in recent years. This essay will elaborate how it affects people lifestyle and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why people say that influence of television programs are in danger, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that it not only affects lifestyle, but also leads them to sedentary life. For instance, people tend to watch news and learn many innovative ideas from it. Therefore, it can play a vital role for sharing information and contemporary news.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that television program is also significant factor as there are innumerable reasons for that, but the most predominant one lies in the fact that people get inspired easily from music shows and serials. For example, one of my friends spends close to 18 hours to watch programs. Thus, for this reason, there are high chances to get negatively influenced from this.
In conclusion, while there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that people can easily get influenced positively or negatively from media. I would strongly recommend that people should use it update their knowledge.
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| 2018-12-02 | arami | 88 | view |
| 2018-02-04 | siranjeevi | 77 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that people can easily get influence...
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Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'updates'?
Suggestion: updates
...gly recommend that people should use it update their knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15637860082 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75045547765 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621399176955 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1569633648 50.4703680194 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.909090909 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124526213073 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051520210182 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029770899388 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755280119601 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331610793683 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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