What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day.
Nowadays, usage of social media has become a trend and people tends to stay online for whole day. However, there are both merits and demerits of staying connected at social media for 24 hours a day. In this essay we will discuss the drawbacks and benefits of using social networking sites on daily basis for 24 hours.
To begin with, social media is a kind of addiction and it has changed the normal way of our lives. Two decades earlier, sleeping habits of people were quite strict but today people likes to sleep late because social media has become a weakness for them. For instance, a recent study suggests that students who do not sleep in time because of staying online on social sites are found to be less efficient and more lazy in class rooms. Therefore, it is evident that the using social media every time has far reaching negative impacts not only on our society but on our health as well.
On the other hand, using social media for 24 hours a day can keep us updated about news and entertainment. It also provided us a convenient entertainment on our finger tips. For example, social media collectively provide all sorts of channels on a single platform which enables the users to have a glance on everything together without the need of scrolling different TV channels. Hence, it is apparent that why many proponents are in favor of using social media for 24 hours a day.
This essay discussed how social media is effecting our health by keeping us entertained all the time. In my opinion, excess of everything is bad and consequently, usage of social media for 24 hours a day is having more disadvantages as compared to its benefits.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-09-17 | Nkhatri | 80 | view |
| 2019-08-12 | iapunzalan | 77 | view |
| 2019-05-03 | neelu sharma | 85 | view |
| 2018-12-19 | titanic-basnet | 72 | view |
| 2018-10-14 | amirnaji24 | 88 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68493150685 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51809924235 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554794520548 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4098113698 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.230769231 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.25397266985 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440407559238 0.242375264174 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183251861345 0.0925447433944 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135479900862 0.071462118173 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300984761233 0.151781067708 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104362689754 0.0609392437508 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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