You are organising a conference for your company. Write a letter to a college guy asking him or her to give presentation during conference
Discribe what this conference is about.
Describe why you want him or her give presentation
Give detail aboutt the conference
Dear Smith
Hello! How are you? I am fine. I hope you are also in good health. I am writing this letter to asking you to give detail of presentation for conference
I am employer of Mahindra company in Ludhiana and I will arrange a conference for all employes how to recycle the car engine. Because I am leader of employs and boss is able to select for create a presentation for conference. This conference was held on 22 February 2018 and presentation is based on recycling engine. I was choose you because you have knowledge of cars. I know you are Busy in their personal life but you will left to days for me in your job and create presentation and give me on particular time.
In presentation, you are creating three column, and give following details of recycled engine in proper way.I would be very grateful if you give this presentation to me on time and support me.
Yours truly
Aman
- According to a survey people involve certain professions are seen to be honest What is the situation in your country Why 63
- Nowadays parents put too much pressure on the children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this. Is this a negative or positive development 67
- People think that improving Road safety will only be possible by increasing the legal age limit for new drivers do you agree or disagree 83
- Many criminals commit for the crimes as soon as the released from prison?What do you think are the causes.What possible solutions can you suggest . 67
- The best way to solve the words environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ne. I hope you are also in good health. I am writing this letter to asking you to...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...etail of presentation for conference I am employer of Mahindra company in Ludh...
^
Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...ion is based on recycling engine. I was choose you because you have knowledge of cars....
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...usy in their personal life but you will left to days for me in your job and create p...
^^^^
Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'column' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'columns'.
Suggestion: columns
...In presentation, you are creating three column, and give following details of recycled...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...etails of recycled engine in proper way.I would be very grateful if you give this...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57055214724 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72266869766 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58282208589 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9681810692 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310952248664 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111994242896 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075482151357 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241658454825 0.12726935374 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670894842831 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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