A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
"It is very difficult to run a good government with bad leaders".
While some people feel that there should be different educational system or different curriculum, but many are of the opinion that the entire nation should have the same national curriculum until they enter college. On one hand it is the diferent system of education for different states and on the other hand it is giving equal education for the entire nation. I am of the opinion that the whole nation should be provided with same level of educational facilities.
My chief reason for choosing this type is that if the people in a country have good and equal knowledge then only the country will also develop. Everyone in the nation should be treated the same, that is there should not be any inferiority complex in people when it comes to education. For example, the quality of education given in rural parts are not so good compared to the quality of education given in cities or urban parts. So due to this we do not see good students with good education coming out of rural parts. For this reason I believe giving same level of education is better.
Another reason for my view is different states have different types of education until the students enter college. So there is an imbalance in the system of education in the country. Lets look at the example of Karnataka provide SSLC for the students, here the content which student study is not that great in qauality were as some states provide CBSE which is one of the best system with good quality education. Due to this reason some states produce excellent students and some do not.
However, if there is different systems it good in some point. But having the same type of educational system for the entire country is best. Weighing up both the sides we can concule there should be same national curriculum until the students enter college.
For all the reasons stated above, I believe that providing same curriculum for the students is the correct. And investing on students education is the good foundation for the future for any country to become fully developed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Message: Did you mean 'there are different systems'?
Suggestion: there are different systems
...tudents and some do not. However, if there is different systems it good in some point. But having the s...
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Line 11, column 126, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...udents is the correct. And investing on students education is the good foundation for th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81095890411 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48353406508 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424657534247 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6652446873 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280376920691 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996965566418 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123876612673 0.0758088955206 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157874930732 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105848328036 0.0667264976115 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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