Action movies with spectacular car chases are very popular with young people.It is often said that these sorts of movies lead to increase in car accidents among young drivers as they try to copy what they have seen in films.Do you agree that such movies increase the amount of bad driving.What can b done to encourage young people to drive more safely?
In this present epoch of materialism and competition, life security is first and foremost possession of every person, but nowadays, youngsters are moving towards reckless and very fast driving practices due to impact of some dangerous action movies on their mind, which contributes to the rise in road accidents. I completely agree to the above view point and will discuss about the causes and measures of this issue in the following segments.
There is plethora of reasons for rough driving and the predominant is that youth wants to earn not only money after accepting these kinds of challenges, but also they want to shine their fame so to have a different attitude due to the effect of present films in television. Moreover, nowadays teenagers are following the acts of moviestars not only for their fame, but they also think that it would give them pleasure and peace of mind. They have a spirit of competition and always like to defeat other drivers on the road, which causes dangerous life-threatening incidents. For instance, youngsters want to become like movie's hero without taking care of their life and take risk ignoring their parent's emotions at all.
Every cloud has a silver lining.So, there are numerous factors to curb out this problem. Primarily, government should put a heavy penalty on such reckless driver. Moreover, before telecasting and producing such kind of movies this should be censorised by censor Board. In addition to it, there should be organisation of seminars for the awareness of young ones about the safety of their life.Last but not the least, parents also play an indispensable role ,so they should monitor the activities of their offsprings and provide them counselling.
In compendiun, life can never be returned back if once lost. Therefore youth should prioritise security during driving practices. So that they can enjoy their present and future life without any fear and worry.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'movies'' or 'movie's'?
Suggestion: movies'; movie's
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Suggestion: So
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70046607214 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596825396825 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.8003944764 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.384615385 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12237596878 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041143730355 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280181294298 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691424592418 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277481063061 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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