More and more businesses, as well as individuals, are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.
Since the beginning of the 21st century, people have used different methods for communication, such as, mobiles, internet, Facebook and others. Some people believe that using technological devices for communication has many benefits, while others argue that depending on these devices will cause a negative impact on society relationships. This essay will discuss the positive and negative impacts of depending mainly on technological devices in our communications.
Using technological devices in our communication has a positive impact on our businesses. This new technique enables people to communicate much faster than they were in the past. For example, before 100 years ago, sending a message from USA to Spain needs about 2 months, but now, it just takes a few second by using the internet. Therefore, it seems clear that using technology in communication has a great benefit of exploiting the time effectively.
On the other hand, some people think that using technology affect on community relationships badly. People these days spend less hours together. Recent research, which was conducted in USA, has shown that the meeting time between the family members decreased significantly during the last 50 years from 50 hours weekly to 20 hours only, this is due to the invention of computers and mobiles. But, these people are unaware of the fact that this
technology has helped people to communicate easily, especially, family members who live in different countries. Thus, invention of technology affect people lives positively either on their businesses or on their social lives.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the positive and negative impacts of the invention of technology devices, such as phones and computers. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that different developments in the communication field affect positively on human lives in both fields, their social lives and their works.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...ionships badly. People these days spend less hours together. Recent research, which was co...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ionships badly. People these days spend less hours together. Recent research, which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44966442953 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98636602828 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0940891741 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204169055261 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820332801783 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526752089516 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119979164687 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568391581518 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.