"As long as we continue to improve our technology, population growth will never be an issue."
Discuss the extent you agree or disagree with this statement.
These days technology is booming at very great pace. It is always argued that if we will continue improving our technology then skyrocketing human population will not be a concern. This essay will discuss the reasons how increasing human population will be an issue despite improved technology.
To commence with, as long as we will continue advancing our technology, our increasing population will be an issue. More advanced technology will lead to high unemployment rate for humans. Artificial intelligence, for instance, at what rate is being developed, has already started taking away more human jobs. Consequently, increased population will be a matter of high concern in terms of sweeping towards unemployment with improved technology.
Improving technology doesn't give the sources of renewable energies which increasing population will need in the future. Human population need certain natural resources to survive such as water, food etc. These requirements are insurmountable to fulfill with improved technology which human beings will need to live. Thus, advancing technology doesn't give the guarantee that increasing population is not a matter of concern.
This essay discussed how improving technology will take away all human jobs or will not be able to fulfill water and food needs of increasing population. In my opinion,increasing population will always be an issue despite we improve our technology continually.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , increasing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, then, thus, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 6.10837438424 262% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6267281106 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14704371344 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529953917051 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5986316202 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.9230769231 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312727091736 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143775263982 0.0925447433944 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123681557557 0.071462118173 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231534638336 0.151781067708 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710497417728 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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