In many countries today, there are concerns about the unhealthy lifestyles that people lead.
What health issues are linked to modern lifestyles? What answers to these problems can you suggest?
New trend of living has caused enormous problems for people nowadays. These could range from physical and mental issues. However, there are effective measures that could be taken regarding solving these problems.
On the one hand, physical and mental problems could root be rooted various causes that people experience during a days. For instance, because of intense working hours people could not find adequate time for cooking, so they opt more for fast foods. As a result, this eating habit would contribute to uncountable issues such as obesity, incurable disease like diabetes which is concluded from usage of excessive sugar-coated foods and high blood pressure. In term of mental, problems, modern lifestyle would result in depression and isolation. Furthermore, the interaction between people has decreased significantly and to some extent, they don’t tend to come over to each other home.
On the other hand, there are definite resolution that could be achieved by help of authorities, media and school. First, in order to curb the spread of junk foods in society government should legislate effective laws. For example, they could put some extra taxes on fast foods and unhealthy meals. Similarly, advertisement could play a vital role in raising the awareness of people regarding hazardous effects of unhealthy foods. Therefore, government should unify their efforts to produces effective and eye catching ads. Furthermore, it would be wise if employer be more flexible about working hours toward workers or end of working hours earlier day before holidays. This could let people have more time to spend on planning for a party or visiting their relatives weekly.
Overall, it is manifested that modern life style not only would bring about physical issues, but also it would contribute to mental problems. Of course, authorities could solve these problems by taking some serious and suitable actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, of course, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38079470199 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61546018701 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2319059551 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5882352941 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104996827833 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361291937302 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280164881983 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717326043005 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161421458875 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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