Some people are of the opinion that women should play an equal role in police or military forces like army, others believe that this work is unsuitable for them.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the generation of women empowerment, women participation is visibly equal to men in any sector. Many women have set records in history of making it big in their achievements in police and armed department.
This essay seeks to address whether women should aspire becoming officers in police or military forces.
Women are more practical and logical in evaluating any challenge. But, physically they are not par with the requirement skills of a officer, who needs to face challenges with physical strength. Any police or mililtary officer has to have the built up body and immense spontaneous responding skill to confront the daily crime or at the war. Women have the instant reacting accomplishment but they are weaker with their natural builtups. There are instances where women officers portrayed a significant personification at borders though.
Any judicial department including navy, aerial or border forces or police doesn't need to have officers on the battle ground fighting or taking charge of criminals. These division does have subdivisions of planning, design, foreseen challenges analysis. Women can be recruited under the departmnts where they can use their visualising and analystical skills and help the law and armed forcees perform better in their mission, or
any profile which needs supervision of daily functioning or developing plans for smoother operations. The administration skills of women are higher when compared to the men. So we can use this competence of women to have their population in this sector too.
In Conclusion, having equal teamwork of men and women would make any administration easy and in an organized format.
Women participation is equivalently significant for any division to perform better.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45421245421 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0157222407 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.286114717 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129080544449 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050949708378 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379842020095 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810677113469 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035379876087 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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