Some people think that it is more important to plant tree in open area of towns and cities than to build more housing to what extant do you agree or disagree.
Afforestation plays an important role to protect the environment of any areas. Presently,It is considered that,Planting more trees in urban areas are more worthwhile.However,Establishing lots of homes for mushrooming population in cities is necessary which is argued by others.I would like to accord with the former view with my own perception.
There are manifold points to shore up for logging in open areas of mega cities.First and foremost, in this materialistic era, the increasing number of vehicles in cities are the major cause of air pollution. To be specific,These means of transportation emits harmful gasses in atmosphere.Therefore,The plantation of trees and shrubs is the capital way to reduce the level of population.Moreover,The presence of much greenness is detrimental for the rising population in urban areas.As they feel respiratory problems in cities.Thus,trees help a lot to exhale the of oxygen and inhale carbon dioxide.So,It is beneficial to clean the environment
Over and above,The scarcity of trees is responsible for ozone layer depletion .As it effect negatively and leads to health disease such as,cancer,skin injuries and so on.So,To control this ailments in mega cities.It is necessary to plant more and more trees.
On the second side,There are multifarious points to endorse for the development of houses in urban areas.To begin with,In this fast paced era,the increasing level of population need much space for accommodation .Thus,establishing houses are much crucial as compared to trees.Moreover,trees can be planted in rural areas because mega cities provides much facilities for people.so,for those amenities developing living places are helpful.
In conclusion,I personally believe that,Afforestation is much worthwhile to survive in this environment.while,housing is also the fundamental need of mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83455882353 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.2544612627 2.80592935109 152% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 205.899382116 49.4020404114 417% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 264.5 106.682146367 248% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.3333333333 20.7667163134 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.1666666667 7.06120827912 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140712659932 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681814621196 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490823963634 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772850071747 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554923571973 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.7 13.0946893788 219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.42 50.2224549098 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.42 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.56 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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