Why farmers in India is doing suicide. Give causes/consequences and solutions.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in increasing figure of farmers suicide. There are a number of factors accountable for why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation can be remedied provided some effective measures are taken.
There are a number of reasons in favour of my stance. The most preponderant is that thanks to global warming. Not only it makes devasted impact on the environment by producing drought conditions, but also it brings out unpredictable weather, which leads farmers to take such a heinous action. Needless to say, all these demerits have a far-reaching impact on agriculture society.
Steps to deal with this problem are many; the most effective ones are not remote or complicated, but accessible and practicable. The primary one lies in the fact that government can bring new welfare schemes in favor of farmers and provide financial help to restrain them to take such an action. Only when convergent efforts from all the sectors are ensured, can we expect to see a considerable progress in curbing the problem.
To conclude, dealing with farmer suicide is one of the most prevalent problems that faces all most all parts of the world today. Nevertheless, concrete steps as mentioned above can effectively strengthen the fight against and alleviate this growing concern. Its potential impact is indeed to dire to ignore.
- Tourism in a less developed country has both disadvantages and advantages. Discuss your point. 77
- What is important invention, computers, antibiotic or airplane and why. 11
- Some people believe law changes human behaviour. To what extent you agree and disagree? 55
- What is the important invention, the computer, antibiotics or airplanes and why? 65
- Some people believe law changes human behaviour. To what extent you agree and disagree? 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 381, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'considerable progress'.
Suggestion: considerable progress
...ctors are ensured, can we expect to see a considerable progress in curbing the problem. To conclud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, nevertheless, so, then, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17030567686 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88125566681 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633187772926 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5217915268 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0769230769 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0669074502 0.242375264174 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0221680690589 0.0925447433944 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321670807761 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0436662061744 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309072635615 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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