In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and there levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are causes of these problems and what measures can be taken to solve them
In various countries the mean weight of the genral population is on the rise and health an fitness levels are declining .There are many factors contributing towards this issue such as lack of recreational facilities and health education amongst the genral population
Education regarding any topic provides the society with complete information about a specific topic such as its negative and positive factors.There are many people who are unaware about the impact there unhealthy food habits have on there health.Hence, if such people are provided with proper literature about the food they consume and proper information about is provided it would provide them with details about how to avoid such foods in the future and what healthier options can be used.For example an article was published in the huffington post which provided proper statistical analysis showing 22 percent of the population in the US is overweight and of the that 22 percent,53 percent are completly unaware of the healthier alternate options available
Healthy lifestyle and rapidly decreasing fitness levels are directly correlated with excercise.Hence for the genral population to attain optimal fitness levels they should be provided with recreational facilities.This responsibility should be put on the governments shoulders to built proper sports centers at different localities.For example, a survey was conducted which showed 35 percent of districts of Pakistan are deprived of recreational facilities and parks .
To conclude there are various factors contributing to the growing issue of increased average weight.But there are solution to these problems which can control and bring a steady decline in these growing numbers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, regarding, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63706563707 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01152618133 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555984555985 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 129.0 20.2975951904 636% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 647.5 49.4020404114 1311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 730.0 106.682146367 684% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 129.5 20.7667163134 624% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.5 7.06120827912 361% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165727344813 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140768691425 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0182523198858 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104584600184 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359862923566 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 69.9 13.0946893788 534% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -76.38 50.2224549098 -152% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 56.0 11.3001002004 496% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.62 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.16 8.58950901804 176% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 53.6 10.1190380762 530% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 10.7795591182 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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