In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed. Does a common man suffer from a group ideology? Express your opinion and support with reasons and example.
Nowadays, each radical idea may lead to death of thousands of people. A whole societies are described and judged by their ideology and individuals are not excluded. In this essay i will describe how single peoples are suffering because of the birth place and main ideology of the society.
Firstly, most of the people who live in Jewish countries has the same faith. Because of that forced roots connected to the tradition and history in such societies ether you become one of them or not. This leads to many deaths and may suffer many human beings. While in other countries there are various of the faith, in some special places like described differences are not accepted.
Secondly, ideology may lead to wars and fights among people. For example, upright at the Urcaine lead to the bloody massacre in whole country. Many people were wounded and killed because of the internal war and international conflict occurred. Therefore, such historical events may involve many people who are not connected to such ideology.
This essay discussed how ideology, faith and ideas may influence on an every day people live and their future. In my opinion too many individuals already suffered for the movements which they were not part off.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'society'?
Suggestion: society
...o death of thousands of people. A whole societies are described and judged by their ideol...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...viduals are not excluded. In this essay i will describe how single peoples are su...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'societies'' or 'society's'?
Suggestion: societies'; society's
...ed to the tradition and history in such societies ether you become one of them or not. Th...
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Message: Did you mean 'an everyday'?
Suggestion: an everyday
...ology, faith and ideas may influence on an every day people live and their future. In my opi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0145631068 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47375230502 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.0925969555 50.4703680194 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.4615384615 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128334352454 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468222547805 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326678915234 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800249891259 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258886553216 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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