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It is indeed true that crimes are increasing day by day which is detrimental for society because it leaves adverse effect on society.some criminals commit crime again and again duento various reasons which I will discuss in next paragraph. However, the problem is not rampant yet it is curbed by taking concrete steps
There are plentiful reasons why criminals commit crime again and agani .first and foremost season is that criminalss habitual of prisonment when they go imprison two or three times.that why they do not think committing crime.next,the environs of the prison is not so good when a people once go in prison they meet inmates of prison and learn new modesnof crime and mimicking the voilet behavior. Hence they commit serious crime. Also,due to unacceptance in the society once go to prison they lose name and fame they became unfamus .in the consequence they again choose the path of crime.lastly after came out to imprison they lose the opportunity of job they can not work in any department owing to thisthey find new ways of earn money and they.choose the crime.
However, there are several solution to curb this trouble to begin with,government should provide separate rooms in prison for all guilities.so they do not meet each other and provide good ambience for guilitiea. An anothe point in which I believe to be pivotal is that government should not only.provide education, but also teach skills to the criminals .so,when they go out from the imprison,they can not do work.lastly,government should give a harsh punishment for a serious crime.hence,they think before commiting a crimeto conclude l,I strongly recommend that their is a mutual responsibilities to curb on crime.we should also provide the acceptance of those people who dance go to prison
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, lastly, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08904109589 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03424657534 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.700794155 49.4020404114 317% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 247.666666667 106.682146367 232% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.6666666667 20.7667163134 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201250079512 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113608942113 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476839320976 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126686376181 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670863829322 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.9 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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