Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they donot really need them. Why is it happening, in your opinion? It is positive or negative trend for the individual and the society.
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic change was over couple of decades. Presently, in modern time,a large number of masses are spending amount on various things. However ,others reckon that buying things is not necessary for them.here,i will also discuss merits and demerits in this essay.
There are manifold views to endorse my point and view. Fisrt and foremost, most of folk have become fashionable in contemporary world.thus,they are buying number ofthings such as cosmetic product,clothes, shoes and so on.hence, they purchase these things for good looking. In addition to this, a massive number of companies are showing product via adverts.as a result, people look various product by advertisement.morover,it is commonly seen that sometimes companies give discount on numerous products.therefore, they spend amount on different things.on the contrary,opposite wind is also there.
Further emphasizing to my point of view, if people will invest amount on lot of things then they can become extravagant. Consequently, they will spend amount on unnecessary things due to this it puts adverse implication on their pocket money.besides it,it is a cause of excessive consumerism.to demonstrate, most of richest person purchase massive goods which are not necessary for them.thus,after using these products, they through here and there which is causes of ecological hazards. Last but not least, nowadays few products is pack in plastic reffers such as box toys and so on, after using of these products they through raffers on landfill sites which puts adverse impact on animals and so on.
To recaptulate, undeniably purchasing product is quite essential part of life. However, we can not reduce of some extent. Hence ,they should purchase things in limit which is necessary for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25200306995 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625454545455 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.499966452 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.583333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14412003362 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514557924373 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511144333541 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878984628689 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182559513957 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.