Government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. Agree or disagree?
It is now highly debatable issue that investing money by the government for the development of fine arts including painting and music. Some people are in talking in favor of the topic while some state that it is not advisable. This essay will provide you necessary arguments before jumping to conclusion.
There is a myriad arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that these various forms of art are vital for the growth of a nation, therefore, need government support to survive and thrive in the country. Not only can music and painting induce discipline in people but can also give them a chance to shine is these fraternity nationally as well as internationally. It hardly needs mention that these merits stand the country in good stead as far as development is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that music and painting are the two varied medium of expressing the emotions and this sector deserve the investment to acquire the desired development. Besides, the government is responsible for providing citizens with liberty to adopt any form of art to thrive. For example, Australian government invested 30 percent budget for supporting the art in the year 2017, and as a result, improvement in people artistic sense increased 50 percent.
Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of dedicating the hefty amount of budget for the art. In the view of arguments stated above, one can conclude that the benefits of investing in the field of art are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'argument'?
Suggestion: argument
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...can also give them a chance to shine is these fraternity nationally as well as internationally. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, so, therefore, well, while, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92664092664 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75111088147 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57528957529 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1316554255 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109834079317 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386348623094 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428912185845 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684686231441 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327930125478 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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