Today, the high sales of consumer goods reflects the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Today, the high sales of consumer goods reflects the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this era of sales promotion broadcast, it is evident that elevated sales in household commodities represents the potential influence of fancy advertising by the companies instead of actual necessity based requirements of social order in which they are offered to sale.

I don't agree to this statement which I would like to discuss in detail in order to support my point of view. The excessive diposal of products of personal use reflects the buying power of community. It means people are striving for better standards of living for which they are making great efforts to earn more. Gone are the days when only men were considered to be the earning member of the family. Today, it can be easily witnessed in many families that the whole family is participating in providing financial support to the household. In return, the living conditions of society is getting better day by day which largely reflects in the household commodities they are using.

High sales of consumer goods also depends upon the commodity itself. If the product is vital in daily based usage then it will definitely be purchased by the consumer whether it is being advertised or not. People are educated, smart, technology friendly and fully aware of their needs and desires these days which bringing the practicality in society in general depicting the most basic fact that today if you buying something that is not beneficial for you in the long run then in the near future you'll be selling those of your things which are actually necessary for you.

Nevertheless, we cannot full ignore the griefy side of advertisements especially those includes high profile celebrities affecting the minds of youth.

Taking all the above mentioned facts into account, these advertisments should be seen as awareness packages about the products selling in the market which helps us to make up a decision easily. They introduces us to new items which we may need and we can easily make comparisons between the commodities in the basis of durability, price and easy excess.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...in which they are offered to sale. I dont agree to this statement which I would l...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...making great efforts to earn more. Gone are the days when only men were considered ...
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Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...in the long run then in the near future youll be selling those of your things which a...
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Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'introduce'
Suggestion: introduce
...s us to make up a decision easily. They introduces us to new items which we may need and w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02352941176 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72127336365 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.071909449 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.384615385 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247641645309 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778936464672 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463174676948 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119803611106 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487554184181 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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