Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while other believe that a bicycle is a better way.
discuss both view and give your opinion.
Few masses assert that bicycle is the stunning way for travel. However, other think that the car is a good mean of transportation to cover the distance in cities. Whereas, before farming any firm opinion both side will be discussed in upcoming pharagraph.
To embark with , there are manifold points to sore my views. First and foremost, bicycle is the one of the great thing to cover the distance .With the help of person can live fit and fine because when they ride the bicycle then all body parts move and reduce the obesity. Secondly, bicycle is the cheap source because when anyone want to any other place they have to pay money .However, on bicycle they do not need to pay money to reach their destination . Thirdly, bicycle reduce the traffic congestion this is because when people use bicycle for travel they ignore other mean of transport so it contribute to reduce traffic problems.
On the other hand, undoubtedly car is the wonderful thing for everyone because it consume less time to cover the distance. With the help of car one can easily reach their destination. Moreover,car uplift the standard of people because it provide luxuries lifestyle also it provide comfort and other facilities. Namely, entertainment ,comfortable seats and so on. Furthermore,car is expensive thing. Individuals uplift the states in society also it saves precious time . When anyone have any problem with the help of car anytime ,anywhere they can go and tackle the problems.
To sum up , it is true that, car and bicycle have their own prose and cons. Thus, in my point of view car is good thing because it saves our precious time and provide comforts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, whereas, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85765124555 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56748616865 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540925266904 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7059714094 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197144722399 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633724781893 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470102558659 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131408818229 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656713342621 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.