The gap between the rich and the poor is increasing wide, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause? What are the solution?
In today's society, these are a wide gap between the rich and the poor. Whereas the rich people become richer, the poor people grow poorer. This essay will examine not only the main consequences but also brings some possible solutions for this issue.
It is clear that increasing the gap between the wealthy and the indigence has some drawbacks. First of all, it reduces economic growth. This is because of government has to grant more for the poor people to restrict the poverty by reducing or exempting tuition, premium, taxes. As a consequence, the economic lacks of investment and becomes decline. Since the low education level, the poor people don't have a means of obtaining money, they turn to commit crime such as stealing, gamble or drug addiction.
What is needed now is finding the solutions. There are some solutions for these problems. It is advisable that government should invest more in education. The schools in rural areas should be modernised and well-equipped. Thanks to this way, students will have high education level and they have more opportunities to apply the jobs. Moreover, raising funds from the richer ones to share for poorer ones is also the feasible solution. Having aids from wealthy ones, the poor people have money to business, earn more money and clear off the debt. As a result, the poverty will be pushed back and the gap between the poor and the rich will be narrowed.
In conclusion, the distance of the rich and the poor causes many social ties. The government has to be accountable for the solution these problem and decides for the prosperity of their country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...he low education level, the poor people dont have a means of obtaining money, they t...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
... has to be accountable for the solution these problem and decides for the prosperity of their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, well, whereas, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90842490842 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51878317327 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545787545788 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7865663838 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4444444444 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385618645076 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110219864887 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125281000475 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247203779114 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131002070494 0.056905535591 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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